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<Original><Pony> Pinkie Responsibility Pie

Postby DasDeer » 24 Jan 2012 13:48



One dedicated for the more responsible side of Pinkie!

Had a blast doing this one, did some things that i've never done before. (Alot of voice samples, and an accordion, for example!)

All feedback is appreciated!
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Re: <Original><Pony> Pinkie Responsibility Pie

Postby CommandSpry » 24 Jan 2012 14:41

Aah, that melody was sweet :) I need a relax from all the Dubstep :) Thanks!
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Re: <Original><Pony> Pinkie Responsibility Pie

Postby Rifftrack » 24 Jan 2012 16:57

Loved it. Absolutely loved it. the end, my GAWD THAT ENDING! HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG
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Re: <Original><Pony> Pinkie Responsibility Pie

Postby TheSunAndTheRainfall » 24 Jan 2012 18:41

Aw, this is a really sweet tune. I really love the piano work here, it just shines. And yes, heart attack right at the end, omaigawd.
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Re: <Original><Pony> Pinkie Responsibility Pie

Postby Leatherneck » 24 Jan 2012 22:37

Pretty interesting and catchy, a fairly good reflection of Pinkie's personality if you ask me.
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Re: <Original><Pony> Pinkie Responsibility Pie

Postby Versilaryan » 24 Jan 2012 22:45

Awww. Loved how you used vocal samples. I actually laughed out loud at the "Oui, zat is correct, madame!" "Well duh!" The groove was really nice, too, had kind of a Latin feel to it.

Two big things, though. The bell set(?) sounds like it's out-of-time. For some reason, it's coming in a little bit earlier than it should be. And that rhythm is so cool! You should emphasize it some more! You can make the piano more prominent, have other instruments also playing the rhythm, have more moving lines moving to accent the syncopated parts of the rhythm, or just have the drums groove on that rhythm more, to throw some ideas around. Especially at the beginning, I think it would be cool if the rhythmic, driving feel was really prominent before suddenly dropping out of the way for the more laid-back section around 0:48.
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Re: <Original><Pony> Pinkie Responsibility Pie

Postby Makkon » 24 Jan 2012 22:53

That was absolutely adorable. Just wow XD

Great instrumentation! There was some off-timing that was probably intentional but didn't really fit so well (it sort of made the song messy in places) but otherwise it was great.
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Re: <Original><Pony> Pinkie Responsibility Pie

Postby DasDeer » 25 Jan 2012 02:19

Versilaryan wrote:Two big things, though. The bell set(?) sounds like it's out-of-time. For some reason, it's coming in a little bit earlier than it should be. And that rhythm is so cool! You should emphasize it some more!


Makkon wrote:
Great instrumentation! There was some off-timing that was probably intentional but didn't really fit so well (it sort of made the song messy in places) but otherwise it was great.


The parts that were off-time weren't intentional; probably just a result of me being sloppy. Thanks for telling me about it guys! :)
I'll try out some of the stuff you said Versilaryan; your ideas sound very cool!
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Re: <Original><Pony> Pinkie Responsibility Pie

Postby Freewave » 25 Jan 2012 17:13

Aw this was nice and sweet and a great reflection of the charcter. I would have loved the samples just a little louder in the mix and otherwise Versilaryan's points are both good.
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Re: <Original><Pony> Pinkie Responsibility Pie

Postby CGEyeGuy » 26 Jan 2012 01:01

As Pinkie Pie once said, "I never felt joy like that before!"

That was an amazing tune, great work!
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