<trance><nonpony>Tropical advantage

[Berri]

this is a trance song i finished ages ago but recently decided to polish up and release. it is my second attempt at trance i think that this one is good by my standards but i imagine theres about a million problems in it which i don't hear.
https://soundcloud.com/theberri/berri-tropical-advantage
your opinion on this would be very much appricated

thank you for your time