<original><wip><semipony> Above The Clouds

[Hawk]

Because I have the habit of not finishing tracks imma post a WIP so I can get at least some feedback on it. I kinda liked the idea and it sounds almost bearable to me but I'm not sure if I want to/can finish it.

I don't know what you would call this, it started out as Tech House

https://api.soundcloud.com/tracks/153393158?secret_token=s-MRyr2

I will do anything for feedback

[Viricide Filly]

Definitely needs some subtle changes to the percussion like halfway through the drop. Otherwise, continue with this! It's pretty good.

[Guthey]

Okay, well, this is interesting, never heard this kind of stuff before. So I'm going to listen to a track real quick to try to understand what you're going for.

Okay, well, I'd say you have the beat sequence down. It sounds like the light sub you have is a little to vibrant, the only thing I can really pay attention to, do as viricide said and tone the sub down a little. The overall genre seems to be very strict on a constant beat with very subtle changes to it. It sounds like you just have to add some random sythns to this to create an actual melody with this. The pad is pretty nice, but there is much hidden potential with it.

I'd say that this is pretty nice, just add some synths, a random pony vocal with reverb and delay, slowed down a little maybe, and I'd say you would have a pretty decent tech house track, Well done!

Since you would do anything for feedback, I would like 1 bar of gold. Pls and Thnk u.

[Hawk]

*gives goldbar* thanks so much for the feedback. You were right it sounds way better with a quieter sub.