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<Pony><Original><Psytrance> Not Scientifically Possible

Postby PsykoPink » 09 May 2014 07:16



So here's another pony psytrance :)
It's melodic psytrance/full-on this time.
I hope you like it, and let me know what you think. ;)
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Re: <Pony><Original><Psytrance> Not Scientifically Possible

Postby ph00tbag » 09 May 2014 13:12

Intro could be a little cleaner, the vocals in particular are a bit muddy.

I like the percussion and sound effects throughout the tune. The percussions themselves could possibly have a little more stereo presence. The acid and sound effects are all great, but the hats and snare drum are very centered.

"I'll have to stop time!" That was a great drop.

I feel as though the sub bass on the bassline isn't very prominent. There's a lot of mid bass, but it's missing that rumble that psytrance is known for.
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Re: <Pony><Original><Psytrance> Not Scientifically Possible

Postby PsykoPink » 17 May 2014 16:04

Umm.. thanks for the honest feedback, I really appreciate it. But what do you mean when you say that the hats and snare drum are centered? Shouldn't they be centered?
Other than that, I understand your comments and I will keep them in mind when working on my future tracks.
Thanks again, and sorry for the delay.. :p
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Re: <Pony><Original><Psytrance> Not Scientifically Possible

Postby Injustrial » 17 May 2014 16:46

Your snares are centered, but I feel the reverb could have been spread more, especially in the upper registers. I'd center the dry hit of the snares and then use the spread function on your reverb plugin (Assuming you have one) and cutting the lower end echo. Your hats could benefit a lot from being a bit wider, I think.
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Re: <Pony><Original><Psytrance> Not Scientifically Possible

Postby BassRabbit » 18 May 2014 04:29

I'm with the others. Sounds are definitely interesting, and there's enough variety to keep the song interesting for the entire 7 minutes. Mostly I just wish that the percussion was ab it heavier. Sounds a little 8-bit ish if you ask me.
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