<original> Rainbow Dash Wrap Up

[DrSorkenstein]

I kinda feel embarrassed about joining and for posting this. Didn't really know what to do with this one, chords are odd, drums are bland, arrangement is meh.

*Edit* Link fixed, Youtube doesn't like when you link to your own profile while being logged in.

[Freewave]

hmmm, and the youtube errors out....

can you fix the link or did you yank this. don't disappear, come back. :O

[DrSorkenstein]

Link is fixed now! Only yanked it from myself.

[randomblockfilms]

well the font definitely matches the music. or does the music match the font? o_O!?!? i dont know but either way its pretty, actually VERY interesting! especially that chiptuney dubstep part. me gusta.

[TheSunAndTheRainfall]

You said you didn't quite know what to do, so I thought I'd chip in with my two cents. Bear in mind that this is all my personal opinion and I might be way to biased and may or may not have a terrible sense of music aesthetics. :B

+ Bring the vocals a bit more to the front.
+ Make the arpy synth a little more subdued.
+ I really like the chiptune/dubstep mix! If anything, I'd suggest to make your groans deeper, more abrasive and overpowering.
+ Make the percussion punchier, especially the bass drum.

The chords are alright. The percussion could definitely be more interesting. You could maybe try to make beat go double time during the dubstep/chiptune part and do something really chaotic/glitchy, that might give the song a little dynamics and maybe even enhance the chiptune thing.

[DrSorkenstein]

Really like your advice TheSunAndTheRainfall, the double time drums in the drop made it A LOT better. I tried to apply some more of your tips but I kinda what to start fresh again and try a to make a song in a similar style.

[Freewave]

overall it was interesting although it seemed to have a little too much reverb on it or something. didn't quite gell but was a good attempt.

[CommandSpry]

It's an interesting concept, and you should expand on this project, I personally don't make this kind of stuff so I can't offer valuable advice ^^