<original><screwing>My attempt on becoming a Soundclown

[DJSadEyez]

Hey folks.

https://soundcloud.com/djsadeyez/i-want-to-be-a-souncdlown-too

No words left.

Thank you.

[Injustrial]

That 90's feel!

OK, I really have no idea how to critique this, as it's so far removed from anything I can possibly relate to.

Technically, I'd touch upon a couple of things. Most notably, the volume of your samples. They're way high, at least to me, which hits me very hard in my face. This is usually something you want your drums to do, not the vocals. Try lowering the levels or remove a few parts with an EQ. FL's parametric EQ is very good at isolating the parts you want removed.

The sudden volume change at the end caught me completely of guard and didn't feel very well executed. Did you sidechain everything to the samples with a long release/decay? If so, try making the transition smoother/setting the sidechain less harshly

[DJSadEyez]

About the vocals, I didn't care in the end. If I wanted to, I would, but that is part of being a Soundclown in particular (as I am concerned). The level raising at the end is also intended. I worked hard for the original melody and beat and it is a perfect instrumental (imho one of the best I've ever done, concerning to do a real track of this touhou house melody).

To get an extra view, check this one:

https://soundcloud.com/notfunnyguy

Then you might know what I say about and get the feels. As easy as it sounds, it is still good work.
I was just trying to screw around, and that is what Soundclowns do usually.

Thank you tho for the report, I still have a few problems with vocal matching, could need a bit help ^.^

[azerty]

Is it just me or is Just Dance shifted a whole tone above the main riff? This could be intentional, I don't know, but it struck me as odd, even for soundclown garbage.

That said, I got a hearty chuckle out of this. Mission accomplished.

[Guthey]

I'm not too sure what exactly soundclown is, but if it's like being a clown whilst making music then I guess you've gotten the job done. I think you got what you were going, and since there doesn't really seem to be anything to actually comment on, i'll just say this made me chuckle a little.

[DJSadEyez]

Thank you guys, tho I am far away of being a pro Soundclown. If you listen to Arcien (notfunnyguy, listed as Prince of Sinewaves atm) then you will know what really is a soundclown. Or good job bro0o0o0o0o0o0 or idk the others names. They are really professional music makers ruining their own sounds kinda. most of the time.

[Injustrial]

Hm, after reading what the others had to say, I think I understand a bit better what you were going for here. If it's what I've come to understand, to make joke-music and make people go all "eeeyh, that's funky!" I think you succeeded.

[DJSadEyez]

Tank you very much, I appreciate :3