<pony><swing><original>Pinky Swing

[GhostXb]

https://soundcloud.com/ghostxb/pinky-swing-mix-4/s-HZQ7i

Hey, so here's my second attempt at making a pinky swing song. Decided to take out the jazz tag cause I thought it wasn't fitting since I'm going for something more dancy. I think it turned out a lot better then my previous attempt, but I still think it could use some work. A friend of mine told me it was a bit repetitive, so I plan on going back to the drawing board to see how I can arrange the song better and hopefully come up with some new parts.

It's a private share right now. I kinda like where it's at, but I think I can make it a great track before I make an official release. I appreciate any feedback. Hope you enjoy.

[Guthey]

The beginning sounds much better, as do the vocals. The thing about swing, however, is that some notes are usually somewhat longer held than others. I'm not saying to extend the notes some, but instead of the one occasional extend pinkie pie voice, you can do can extend some of her lines a little. I'm not saying a whole bunch, but only some of them, not each and every one. I would probably give you an example, but I can't when I'm not messing with vocals, nor am I any good. But I feel that this sounds alot more like a swingy jazz song, the only real issue would be the vocals. The vocals aren't bad, but just some of the segments need to be stretched out a little more.