<Non-Pony> <Moombah/110> U.R.S.

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<Non-Pony> <Moombah/110> U.R.S.

Postby PropellerEscape » 04 Feb 2014 12:44

Recently I seem to be struggling to finish a whole lot of my WIPs which I start, and thus I made this track as a sort of filler whilst I try and get past my writer's/creative block. I'm actually pretty surprised at how well the track came together - it only took 6 hours of work compared to the usual 25 or so. BUT because of this I'm worried about the production quality, so any feedback would be fantastic :3

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Re: <Non-Pony> <Moombah/110> U.R.S.

Postby Guthey » 05 Feb 2014 00:11

This is pretty good for only 6 hours. There doesn't really sound like there are any main issues with this, other than saying the chord progression could use a little variation.

(My own Ideas now) One way you could improve this is to add a little bass to it. In order to do that just created well timed points to initiate a bass sequence. The sequence should last only about .5-1 seconds. Just periodically do that, and maybe during the cooldowns and builds there could be small hints of bass. That's just my own personal idea of how you could possibly improve the variation and overall quality of the track, not saying that it's not already good, but saying of what could possibly make it better.
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