Looking for some feedback

[Kryptage]

I posted this on the wrong board as I just learned -.-, So I'm just gonna do some copy pasta.

So I've been working on a new piece. It's nice, returning to my roots in trance, and I'm really liking the track. Aside from small things that are easy fixes, I feel like there is something missing in the track, that I just can't figure out what.

Maybe I'm just being overly critical, but I want to be sure, so if anyone who reads this wouldn't mind, could you give the track a listen, and give me any critical feedback you can think of.

Heres the link: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/47575731/Weather%20Control.mp3

Any feed back is greatly appreciated.

[meletric]

I think the song itself is great. I wouldn't say anything needs to be added necessarily.
However, sometimes there's a lot going on at once and some the sounds seem to get kind of drown out.
For example, at 1:18-2:02, there are some nice pads and counter-melodies going on, but it becomes difficult to distinguish them.
That's just my opinion though, feel free to ignore me if you disagree. Hope that helps

[Kryptage]

For example, at 1:18-2:02, there are some nice pads and counter-melodies going on, but it becomes difficult to distinguish them.
That's just my opinion though, feel free to ignore me if you disagree. Hope that helps

Yea that's all part of the mixing process. I do all the heavy duty editing once I feel the songs done. I'll be sure to this comment into consideration once I do get to down to mixing.

Glad you like it, and Thanks!