<Pony><Original> Second Chances

[Aviators]

New song guys! This time it's a sad song about poor Trixie. When we see Trixie we think of the stuck-up hoax that she seemed to be... But what did she think about what happened in Ponyville? How did she feel when she was rejected? What if she has feelings just like everypony else, and she's hurting? Haha okay I'll stop getting all dramatic and emotional. Anywho, check out mah new track:


Go ahead, tell me what you think!

[Solarsail]

As I said on the Soundcloud, this is really great, the only thing you could change is that all the parts are at a similar intensity/volume; the chorus could be higher on that.

I'm glad the Toastbeard IRC told you how amazing your voice is.

[guitarskills]

Oh, this was already in my sub box... I'll have to go listen to it again...

Oh, yeah. This was great! I loved the vocals. One problem, though. At times the reverb/delay that overlays the vocals makes it very hard to distinguish the words. Still, amazing!

[Aviators]

I do in fact have an unhealthy addiction to reverb... I need some reverb rehab.

Glad you liked it. I'll definitely try to keep the reverb down for the next song. I'll also try to sing a bit more clearly, I am now noticing that I mumble my quieter words. xD

Oh, this was already in my sub box... I'll have to go listen to it again...

Oh, yeah. This was great! I loved the vocals. One problem, though. At times the reverb/delay that overlays the vocals makes it very hard to distinguish the words. Still, amazing!

[TheSunAndTheRainfall]

Man, I love your singing. The song itself is really neat, I'd only advise to watch the mix. There's lots of instruments fighting for space here, especially the synths during the chorus, to the point where it sometimes feels like the frequencies are... kind of eating each other. Try to mess around with levels, EQ and panning to ensure each instrument has its own place in the mix and doesn't take other instruments' space.

And yeah, cut back a little on the reverb. :B Aside from that, this is pretty awesome!