<Non-Pony><Original><House?> Notelba

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<Non-Pony><Original><House?> Notelba

Postby Wobble Wub » 23 Jan 2014 22:59

Once upon a time, a thousand years ago I made an account on this site looking to get better at making electronic music. I got to it for awhile! There was a long pause however of me getting off of the subject. Well now I'm back! I've decided I will dedicate some of my time to actually doing what I want to do. I just recently made this song (Which is extremely better than the tracks I have preciously made) and I would just like some critics, advice, and any other thing that could help. I really want to get better and better! Like I said I haven't been here in awhile so if I'm posting wrong, or just using the site in a negative way, I'll be glad to be informed. Here is my song:

https://soundcloud.com/wobble-wub/notelba
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Re: Hi! Looking for feedback.

Postby Wobble Wub » 24 Jan 2014 06:50

I see many other people are posting using the "<>" symbols and naming things. If I get no replies I may repost this using the same technique.
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Re: <Non-Pony><Original><House?> Notelba

Postby KvackPack » 24 Jan 2014 12:03

Nice song man!
One thing that came to my mind is that one of the synths has the same melody throughout almost the entire song. I'd suggest to maybe change it up a bit, but that's entirely up to you! :P
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Re: <Non-Pony><Original><House?> Notelba

Postby Wobble Wub » 24 Jan 2014 17:59

KvackPack wrote:Nice song man!
One thing that came to my mind is that one of the synths has the same melody throughout almost the entire song. I'd suggest to maybe change it up a bit, but that's entirely up to you! :P


Thanks for the feedback!

I suppose I do see what you mean by that though. I'll keep it in mind on future tracks.
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