by MasterOfRegret » 08 Jan 2012 21:21
I think what pinkie says at 0:42 does't hold true. This may just be my taste in music.
I think you did a good job with the structure of your song. However, the majority of the song, I have trouble hearing "Winter Wrap Up". You seem to have drowned it out with all your other sounds.
The highest note in your song seems a bit.. importunate (It's the first word that came to mind and I don't know how else to describe it)
The transition at 5:00 seems very sudden.
The ending is kind of sudden as well.
Overall, I didn't like it. But take my opinion with a grain of salt! I'm way too young to be into that genre anyway. And I don't know anything about it.