by Navron » 01 Jan 2014 10:40
Congrats on your first remix! Unfortunately, like all of our first remixes, there's a lot of errors in timing, mixing, and composition, but don't let that dissuade you from continuing.
There's a few times the vocals fall out of sync with the song. I definitely can't blame you on that, as I'm working on my own remix of this song, and the bpm is very hard to pinpoint. There's also a couple times the song pauses, or doesn't complete a full measure (likely changes time signature briefly). You can avoid this by getting the bpm as close as possible to the original song (97.4 bpm I've found, for some f***ing odd reason) and cutting the vocal samples to start on the right beat.
Other than that, I can't hear any backing instruments without headphones. It's literally just the vocal samples and drum track. Make sure you listen to your mixes on a variety of devices and headphones. What may sound good through your speakers may not sound good, or sound at all on somebody else's speakers.
Once again, keep up the good work, and always strive to make your next song better.
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