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[AdmiralCubie]

I need critique ponies! Please respond with critique/advice/and recycled newspaper!



GUISE. I DUNNO WHY THE EMBEDS FAILING. D:
Sorry, if it doesn't work here's a direct link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DEaEiKLq ... ata_player

[Dr_Dissonance]

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[AdmiralCubie]

I think I fixed it and I added a direct link in case it still doesn't work.

[Dr_Dissonance]

There you go!

As for the piece, quite nice! That synth you used for the main melody (starts at 0.45, sounds rather air-like) was a bit odd and there's a lot of noise in the background which I wasn't too sure about, but it was a pretty cool melody!

[CGEyeGuy]

An error occurred! MY DAY IS RUINED!!!

* was about to post youtube link, but got beat to it*

I think I fixed it and I added a direct link in case it still doesn't work.

A note for the future, when embedding youtube vids get rid of the & and everything past it.

I need critique ponies! Please respond with critique/advice/and recycled newspaper!

As for the song, it is pretty nice, but I think you should add some synth drums(not too sure about the synth drums, but worth a try)
Also I am not that big a fan of the LFO Pan at the end it hurt my ears.

[AdmiralCubie]

Thanks guys! I appreciate the critique and Dr_Dissonance? How in the wide wide world of Equestria did you get that youtube embed to work?! O.o

[CGEyeGuy]

How in the wide wide world of Equestria did you get that youtube embed to work?! O.o

You were posting it like this:

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[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DEaEiKLqtJk&feature=youtube_gdata_player[/youtube]

but you needed to get rid of the & and everything past it like this:

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[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DEaEiKLqtJk[/youtube]

[Freewave]

There some frequencies in this that are just a little too high and uncomfortable sadly. As some have said this is a track that with a beat that could interest a bit more people and sound a bit more complete but is still good on its own (kind of Progressive Electronic). Thumbs up overall.

[AdmiralCubie]

There some frequencies in this that are just a little too high and uncomfortable sadly. As some have said this is a track that with a beat that could interest a bit more people and sound a bit more complete but is still good on its own (kind of Progressive Electronic). Thumbs up overall.

Thanks!

How in the wide wide world of Equestria did you get that youtube embed to work?! O.o

You were posting it like this:

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[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DEaEiKLqtJk&feature=youtube_gdata_player[/youtube]

but you needed to get rid of the & and everything past it like this:

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[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DEaEiKLqtJk[/youtube]

I totally knew that... >.>