<Non-Pony> <Liquid Drum & Bass> Ethereal

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<Non-Pony> <Liquid Drum & Bass> Ethereal

Postby PropellerEscape » 10 Nov 2013 05:12

Finally got this track finished, and can say I'm really pleased at how great it turned out :3
Any feedback is welcome too, so tell me what you think!

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Re: <Non-Pony> <Liquid Drum & Bass> Ethereal

Postby ArisingFlame » 10 Nov 2013 05:16

Really, I have no feedback. I just wub it
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Re: <Non-Pony> <Liquid Drum & Bass> Ethereal

Postby RubyVesper » 27 Nov 2013 23:37

I don't think this is liquid, the gassy pad gives it the solid vibe. And yes, also solid can be relaxing and beautiful.
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Re: <Non-Pony> <Liquid Drum & Bass> Ethereal

Postby Guthey » 30 Nov 2013 04:49

So I agree with Kyoga here. The mixing and composition of the song is pretty fine, but the drums at :35 seem a little too generic, as does their later occurance. and the drops seem pretty undefined. By that I mean that there is relatively not much going on but the bass, drums, and casual random synth, pads, and cyms. A little more variation could be done there. Also, during the cool-down here seems to be moments of silence, which, to me, doesn't sound right, maybe a pad or underlying synth could be added, just so you're not waiting for the next chord progression. The bass sounds pretty good, nothing much I would change about it but just to add a bit more modulation, just so it doesn't repeat itself. the drum beat is pretty good also, nothing to change there.

overall, it's a pretty nice sounding song, would add to my playlist and listen to it, the composition is good, just a little more variation would be nice.
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