[Sorta WIP]Nightmare Night(Maretal Mix)

[Meelz]

So I uploaded it to Youtube a while back, and the response was fairly alright, but the common complaint was the lead guitar and and mixing, so I fixed exactly that.
Mind you, my mixing skills are pretty shit, so I'd like a little help with what I should fix before trying to send this into EQD again.

http://soundcloud.com/trogdor1oh1/nightmare-night-maretal-mix-1

Don't hold anything back.

[TheSunAndTheRainfall]

Okay, quick notes:

+ Pan everything you can! I can hear you did this with several instruments, but that guitar during the verses, and the more distorted guitar when the main guitar is playing could sound better if you put them a little to the side so as to leave the center and spotlight to either vocals or main guitars.
+ I'd EQ the vocals differently, they sound a little... I dunno how to explain it. Open roomy? Heavy on certain high frequencies? I dunno, the point is that often they don't blend well with the rest of the song.
+ The main guitar and the backing, sorta palm muted guitar, sound a little out of sync at times.

Aside from that, I'd say everything sounds in place. Your mixing skills are definitely not shit, mate. c:

[Meelz]

http://soundcloud.com/trogdor1oh1/nightmare-night-maretal-mix-2

After taking suggestions from you and a couple friends, here's what I came up with. Some of my friends think I'm all wrapped up, I still have minor doubts.