Canterlot at Night

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Canterlot at Night

Postby Exiled Tenshi » 13 Nov 2013 08:13


Please feedback would be dearly appreciated. I'm new to music and would love some help on how to make my songs I make in the future better thank you. <3
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Re: Canterlot at Night

Postby simonli2575 » 13 Nov 2013 09:05

Nice ambient music, though I can't help but feel that the drums don't quite pack a punch and their volumes are too low.
I like the pianos, though after a while this becomes a bit monotonous, if you could change the chord progression a bit in the middle of the song that would make it better.

Just wondering though, what DAW are you using?
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Re: Canterlot at Night

Postby Injustrial » 13 Nov 2013 14:24

I'm hearing this on a cheap and simple computer 5.1 system, so my feedback might not be all too correct.

What I'm hearing is some beautiful, albeit brittle strings, some nice piano plucks and some drums. The content is there, with some nice melodies and a rich atmosphere.

The thing sticking out to me the most are the snare hits. They feel hollow and a bit dull. I would love for them to have a sharper, more distinct sounds and perhaps a wider reverb. The kick could also be a bit meatier, but since we're talking a relaxed and nightly melody, it could easily become too much.

All in all, there's not really that many faults to me as a person listening in. Just a bit more defined sound in some areas, and perhaps a slightly lower piano would make the difference here. I always value content over quality and haven't been able to train my ears properly to provide much mixing feedback, so there's probably a lot more that could be said.
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