<Half-Pony?><Original><Electronic> Daydreaming

[DzejPi]

First of all I would like to say: Hi, mylittleremix! I'm new here, I'm also still learning, I would like to spend more time with music, but I'm pretty busy at the time. Despite that, I made song few days ago. It wasn't supposed to be like this, but I kept changing it and then, I loved it. So I put it on YouTube today and I would like to know what do you think about it.


Also, I'm not sure if it's pony song, because there are no lyrics. :D I used pony background though!
I will be appreciated for any feedback. Thanks, ponies!

[Polarlys]

I'm really liking what you've got going on here. The one thing I think you should've done though, is adding bass. It's beautiful indeed, but it's not really climatic compared to, let's say the intro. Reverse reverb before the choruses maybe, just to build it up a bit??

Also, some variation to 2:34 might've done the trick, at least to me.. Making it a bit more.. Ascending, is that the right Word to use here?

Well, that's what I felt when listening to it, at least. Good job nonetheless!

[DzejPi]

Oh, bass! I knew I forgot something! Thank you for feedback, I will definitelly not forget it when I will work on next song! ^.^