<Progressive House><Non Pony>

[the4thImpulse]

Getting close to wrapping this one up, there are some small arrangement tweaks I may or may not try out. Open to all suggestions and feedback.

https://soundcloud.com/the4thimpulse/track-7

[Guthey]

Well, this is pretty good, not really anything wrong with it but the progression. I actually don't see it progressing anywhere. 00:14 is where the prog beings, I assume, then it cuts and builds again at 00:45, and cuts again at 1:15, then it doesn't really go anywhere. the main issue is that there are some cuts, which indicates another build, but you keep taking out a pad, synths, sequence, or whatever you may call them and doing so doesn't really take the song anywhere anywhere, just back to their starting point. it's a nice harmony, but I think you could either spread out all your sounds, so that at one point they all meet and form a nice little progressive harmony, or you can just do some nit picking and figure out what you want to keep in it's place and change around some of the sound to either make them longer so you don't run out of sequences and have to resort to throwing the same one in again. just an idea, might be wrong, but it's an idea. pretty good song though, comp is good, just keeps cutting and losing some of the progressive sounds, which is bad in a progression.

[the4thImpulse]

That's just what I needed to hear, thank you.