<Original> Tia's Mistake

[Exiled Tenshi]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2f7eMve1Tg

Just wondering if this sounds any good?

[@ppleBukker]

I see this is your first post, so WELCOME TO MLR!

Okay, on to the song. The track sounds very chill and relaxing. I did notice you had something sidechained with the kick that kinda overpowered the pad, or at least that's how I figured it. Maybe turn down the compression just a notch. Also, your mix sounds pretty good. Maybe work with EQing some with the kick. I noticed it was drowned out in some parts. Cut off any frequencies below 100 Hz for all your instruments, except your sub. Maybe boost your kick around 120-150 Hz? Really, just tweak it until you find what sounds good and clear to you.

All in all, it's a really good song. I like the variation in the piano melody. To be honest, I closed my eyes in while listening to this song and let the music paint a beautiful landscape. You've got a great start if this is your first piece. Keep working and improving. You've got great potential.