<pony><Remix><Drum and bass> Winter Wrap Up

[squarehead]

hi folks,

for my first post i'm glad to present you my first remix of a my little pony song.

Winter Wrap Up

Enjoy !

https://soundcloud.com/squarehead-mlp/squarehead-winter-wrap-up

also on youtube :

http://youtu.be/O-Ii-_i3MLo

[Nexaka]

I really like this, finally another Brony DNB artist!~

Anyway, I like the ideas you got there, I'm gonna critique as I listen:

Good ideas, I really like the pads, the vocals could be a bit sharper in the high end (not too much, don't wanna conflict with the hats), it feels a bit dull, they could also be a little louder. I really like the buildup is very unique, that bitcrush effect was executed well. For the drop, the mixings alright, nothing pop ups to much. The bass is nice and big I like that. It feels a bit muddy in the lower mid range though. The chopped vocals really spiced it up a bit, wish there was a bit more of that. The transitions are pretty decent, and it changes it up pretty frequently but the changes themselves are a bit too subtle. Overall it feels like a dnb beat with just the vocals on top, which isn't bad at all, its just not as much movement as there could be. The melody solo at the end was a nice way to finish it off before the conclusion. The pads at the conclusion, however, feel really dry, but I like the idea you were going for.

Overall this is a pretty decent track and I can say I like it! Can't wait to hear more from you :)

[squarehead]

thanks

it's a long way critic that I don't put enough movement in my track... I have not yet found the recipe...

I understand your "dnb beat with just the vocals on top" feels because I was a little bit more lazy after the damn vocal time warping , there's so many tempo move in this track ! ( I know, laziness is bad and i should feel bad )

i'm gonna put a ear on your work ^^