<MLP><WIP> idek the name yet

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<MLP><WIP> idek the name yet

Postby VINXIS » 24 Sep 2013 08:01

I'm technically almost done...

Here...

Really need feedback pls, since I wanna upload this like soon lol
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Re: <MLP><WIP> idek the name yet

Postby VINXIS » 26 Sep 2013 07:53

pls feedbacke ;~; (also these extra words in the brackets are to satisfy the min. char. limit)
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Re: <MLP><WIP> idek the name yet

Postby CitricAcid » 26 Sep 2013 14:39

I like the "creepy castle in an 8-bit video game" aspect that it has. My main gripe is that it feels too long considering how little the texture changes over the course of the piece. I would suggest either shortening it or adding another middleground element (pads or something) that evolve at a slightly faster pace too add more variety to the longer sections (giving it more of an ambient feel).
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