<Pony..?><Original> Dat Rainbow (Electro)

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<Pony..?><Original> Dat Rainbow (Electro)

Postby Ski-Kick » 05 Sep 2013 23:41

Umm, well, first time submitting here. please go easy on me :)

https://soundcloud.com/ski-kick/dat-rainbow

Yeas, I know I'm bad, but i really want to improve, so Feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Mah Soundcloud | Skype @ anxet-sk-i

Now, leave dat Dn'B where u found it, k m8??
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Re: <Pony..?><Original> Dat Rainbow (Electro)

Postby S.P.P » 06 Sep 2013 04:57

This is actually pretty sweet; I really enjoyed this!

All I could say is that the synth riff at the beginning is maybe a little out of place. I think in an intro the riff should have some form of repetition as opposed to more of a 'solo'. It's nothing track braking though.
Also I think the kick should have a little more of an impact, especially in electro. Try EQing the mids a little, and maybe side chaining ever so slightly?

All in all though, nice track! :3
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Re: <Pony..?><Original> Dat Rainbow (Electro)

Postby Ski-Kick » 06 Sep 2013 11:46

PYR3LIGHT wrote:This is actually pretty sweet; I really enjoyed this!

All I could say is that the synth riff at the beginning is maybe a little out of place. I think in an intro the riff should have some form of repetition as opposed to more of a 'solo'. It's nothing track braking though.
Also I think the kick should have a little more of an impact, especially in electro. Try EQing the mids a little, and maybe side chaining ever so slightly?

All in all though, nice track! :3


Thanks for the feedback! (sorry for the late reply, wasn't home pretty much all day)

Glad you liked it, gonna keep what you said in mind next time.

Thanks again!
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