8 measures of Dubstep (my first attempt) [sry no ponies here

[randomblockfilms]

so after watching tv, there was a Chia Pet commercial on and somehow that inspired me to make this. Iv been meaning to make a dubstep for a while but i needed some inspiration. looks like you can get inspiration from the most unlikely sources.
http://soundcloud.com/bobbysmackems/8-measures-of-dub


yeah the lead is kind of flat and stuff but i was working more on the wobble and drum pattern and such.
please criticize your heart out on this.

[SeanNH94]

My one thing is, it's pretty chill for a dubstep song. I suppose you could have been going for that, but personally when I think dubstep I think huge, hard hitting basses and drums. I think playing around with some distortion on your synths, and using a multiband compressor on the master could help. The drum samples sound alright, but perhaps equalizing a little bit might help. Hope this is useful; I'm still not very good at dubstep yet. :\