by Conchetupony » 03 Aug 2013 15:45
Has some potential, but some big issues: the biggest one is that the voice samples are off tune with the rest of the music, e.g at 0:24, 2:20 the samples are in F# minor and the chord being played is G#m. At 0:37 and 1:06, the sample is in C#m.
The sample sounds a bit odd when played repeatedly at 0:30 and 2:28, you left too much of that first 'R' on the spliced sample. Add a very short fade in, or cut a little at the beginning of the sample.
Keep improving c:
oops I dropped the bass
will you pick it up for me