<WIP><Pony><Original><Orchestral> First Flight

[cybermusic]

This is a work in progress. I was in an airplane and when I imagined pegesi going on their first successful flight, I came up with this... I want to add more but that will come later.

Things I am not comfortable with/ not good ATM
Intro: too punchy and loud. Not good enough.
Viola solo: just a copy and paste. Should add something else
Flute part: maybe something else with the harp

Constructive criticism appreciated!

Many thanks!

WAV: https://www.dropbox.com/s/17y408f61oj8l ... WIP%5D.wav
MP3: https://www.dropbox.com/s/xt752scsv0c4q ... WIP%5D.mp3

[Djeinus]

So far so good. Like you said, the intro may be a bit too loud, but this can definitely become something great.

[Axiqor]

Only the first few notes were too loud. Otherwise my main complaint is the violin sounds like a program running a violin sound, not a real violin. So do all the instruments, but you probably don't have a private orchestra to conduct whenever you need. The violin was the main one that stuck out. Add more instruments, so it's like a whole symphony orchestra was playing it, you know? Show the oboe some love, and the cello, and absolutely never forget the string basses.
I think this is great, and has great potential, like the pegasi is describes.

[Paianni]

The treble sounds a bit harsh, and the bass ought to be fuller than it is right now. The violin design also needs some work. But otherwise, its not a bad start by any means.