Hush now quiet now remix(First attempt at a pony song)

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Hush now quiet now remix(First attempt at a pony song)

Postby Daymare » 19 Dec 2011 11:56

This is my first attempt at a pony remix, and my first attempt at music in general in a little over a year. I don't think it's that good, but then, I don't think any of my stuff is that good XD

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Re: Hush now quiet now remix(First attempt at a pony song)

Postby X-Trav » 19 Dec 2011 13:25

A little too much reverb on the voices and pads, makes it sound very muddy when you have multiple voices going at the same time.

Otherwise you have a very nice instrumentation going, sounds peaceful. Good work!
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Re: Hush now quiet now remix(First attempt at a pony song)

Postby Daymare » 19 Dec 2011 13:35

Yeah I was thinking about at least toning down the reverb, especially on the rounds. Thanks for the feedback ^_^
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Re: Hush now quiet now remix(First attempt at a pony song)

Postby Facade » 19 Dec 2011 13:49

pretty sweet keep it up! ^.^ but like X-trav said a little too much reverb = muddy when multiple voices
other then that good work
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Re: Hush now quiet now remix(First attempt at a pony song)

Postby Daymare » 19 Dec 2011 14:56

Reuploaded it, less reverb on the vocals this time :D
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Re: Hush now quiet now remix(First attempt at a pony song)

Postby bartekko » 19 Dec 2011 17:59

I don't know what to say.

I might have fallen asleep in the middle of the song, in a positive meaning to this song.

the reverb isn't as hard as before.

Like it
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Re: Hush now quiet now remix(First attempt at a pony song)

Postby TheSunAndTheRainfall » 19 Dec 2011 18:55

This is pretty neat. If anything, I'd recommend fooling around with the EQ on the vocals or something, so they won't stick out as much now that they're drier. Keep it up. c:
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