Sounded rather peaceful!
My first thought is the crescendo at 1.22 needed to be much bigger!!!
Think specifically about the brass more. I think it's probably just your samples not being fancy pants, but brass timbre shifts hugely over its dynamic range, so utilise that more! If it's just a problem with your samples, then just ignore this point!

Maybe some more percussion dotted about too!
But sounded quite nice, considering the implications of the title!
Also, needed more clusters...
TubeyouYou are the hero My Little Remix deserves, not the one it needs.
So we’ll hunt you. Because you can take it. Because you’re not our hero.
You’re a silent guardian of music, a watchful protector of songs.
A doctor of dissonance.
-Phillypu