[Non-pony, Electronic] Don't Forget to Dream

[Polarlys]

https://soundcloud.com/starlex-1/sarphog-dont-forget-to-dream
This one's been lying in my projects folder for some time now. It's somewhat unfinished, but I feel it's worthy of an upload on its own. Constructive criticism and opinions are both appreciated. Unsure of the genre btw.

[Polarlys]

I've noticed that every thread that I make get no comments (exaggeration, but you get what I mean).. Is it because whatever I make is *that* bad, or am I just unfortunate to get no attention?

I'd really really reeeaaally appreciate constructive criticism, opinions, and tips. Hit me with the hardest you've got

[Paianni]

Not bad, but the arrangement seems incredibly sparse and could do with some more synths, bass and effects. Finally, the chord patterns seem a bit uninspiring and ought to be a little more complicated, in order to live up to the song title. Those were just my thoughts.

[Polarlys]

Not bad, but the arrangement seems incredibly sparse and could do with some more synths, bass and effects. Finally, the chord patterns seem a bit uninspiring and ought to be a little more complicated, in order to live up to the song title. Those were just my thoughts.

Ah, there we go. Yes, it does feel a bit simple, shame I'm in general horrid at effects. Will attempt to delve into it. The melody in general probably needs to be more complex aswell

[KvackPack]

I like the intro a lot, it feels calm and makes the main part of the song stick out more.
The chorus sound good, but it feels like the lead needs some more reverb, just a tiny amount though.

That is what I can come up with so far, I'm currently writing this on my phone so I had to keep it rather short.

Awesome work!