lotrix [dnb]

[Flutterbro]

http://soundcloud.com/digital-conformity/lotrix-working-title-wip

So yeah. My first foray into drum and bass. Feedback, advice, and whatnot would be cool.

[randomblockfilms]

oo trixie sounds a bit frighting in the begining and end. One thing i would recomend is maybe putting more harmonics in the lead part but idk. ive, never done a DnB myself to i wouldn't know too much.

[Rumpy]

Pretty nice stuff here, like the eerie feel of the intro (lo-fi speech samples ftw) and the sturdy, active drum beat. I'm not fully sold when it comes to the song's structure, though. The reemergence of the drums around 1:36 or so may sound awesome, but it doesn't really lead anywhere as just moments later the song crashes into the outro. Perhaps polish that a little.