<pony><original> Down on the farm

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<pony><original> Down on the farm

Postby Krunip » 09 Jul 2013 04:59

So after a month of faffing about trying to work out how to use my DAW i have given up.

Instead i sat down at my keyboard and just tried to make some thing completely separate from my computer. I hope it worked.

https://soundcloud.com/krunip/down-on-the-farm

The song is basically about Apple Bloom getting her cutie mark, realising that it's just an apple (which is indicative of farm work until she dies), getting bummed out and finally thinking it's not so bad because she'll inherit the family hat.

Feel free to tell me what you think.
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My cutie mark is a fedora trenchcoat neckbeard bowl of spaghetti
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Re: <pony><original> Down on the farm

Postby hacillart » 11 Jul 2013 00:24

A nice melody, I like it. I'd like to hear a fraction more sustain on the melody, like at 42 seconds.
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Re: <pony><original> Down on the farm

Postby Krunip » 13 Jul 2013 20:17

hacillart wrote:A nice melody, I like it. I'd like to hear a fraction more sustain on the melody, like at 42 seconds.


Thanks for the feed back, I haven't been doing this for very long so I'm pretty much a musical dunce.
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