<pony><original><psytrance>Astral Roar

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<pony><original><psytrance>Astral Roar

Postby ph00tbag » 04 Jul 2013 12:19

Made a new prog psy track about Ursas.



Let me know what you think. Feedback is always appreciated.
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Re: <pony><original><psytrance>Astral Roar

Postby Pulse » 04 Jul 2013 15:57

I love how the lead synth is doing a lot of panning without being distracting; it definitely fit the atmosphere of the track.
The vocal snippets you used in the beginning could use a little more presence; they felt as if Trixie were a good distance away (which may have been what you were going for). Twilight/Spike sounded fine.
I like that arp that comes in at 4:00; it was airy and dreamy, yet retained the tension that you had established in the track.
I would have utilized that clap (snap?) that you used throughout the track a little more. It really releases some tension and the drum loop feels complete. It also works well to add variety (though minimal) and keep the pacing.

Overall, that was awesome. Totally loved it! :D
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Re: <pony><original><psytrance>Astral Roar

Postby ph00tbag » 05 Jul 2013 05:12

Thanks. I'll keep in mind what you said about the clap.

I actually did mix Trixie low in order to get the far-away sense, since atmosphere is usually a primary goal of the stuff I do, and I've always felt mixing low adds to that.
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