<Pony> <Original> <Electronica> Time to Get our Marks!

[bigmiles2000]

Hello. This is my latest track, "Time to Get our Marks!". It's pretty different from my usual stuff, but I think it turned out decent. (Besides my sucky mixing) Critique is welcome, and encouraged. Thanks! https://soundcloud.com/milesmorton/the-crusaders-go-crusading-the
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[Pulse]

I'd assume that this is in reference to the CMC, because this totally fits. It sounds like something they'd sing to.

Very elegant and a bit chiptune-y. Very nice!

[VaporBlaze]

Looks like the youtube video is down.

I won't disagree, your mixing could use a little work, the lead synth needs to be a lot louder, it sounds incredily muted as is. but the composition and sounds are really cute. It could perhaps use a simple low end synth, your bass seemed lacking throughout the whole song.

The voosh into... nothing... seemed a bit abrupt and out of place at 3:20, the outro didn't sound too graceful, and the song ends kind of abruptly, clipping off the last string note.

Other than that, it was very pleasant, keep up the good work!