I"m not expert in French House, but that bass and kick are really muddy. I'd have given them a little bit more in the high frequencies: a click for the kick; opening the filter on the bass a little and using the filter envelope to give it a nice little pluck.
Overall, that was a nice french house track. Keep up the good work!
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I really don't know. I think the sample was just going out of key so my notes sounded bad with it. I am uploading a new version without the riff and punchier drums... I think.