<Original> <Non-Pony> <French House> Rare Chance

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<Original> <Non-Pony> <French House> Rare Chance

Postby Electric Velocity » 19 Jun 2013 20:56

https://soundcloud.com/electric-velocity/rare-chance

I tried to make this similar to High Life by Daft Punk. Please tell me what you think.
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Re: <Original> <Non-Pony> <French House> Rare Chance

Postby Pulse » 20 Jun 2013 10:04

I"m not expert in French House, but that bass and kick are really muddy. I'd have given them a little bit more in the high frequencies: a click for the kick; opening the filter on the bass a little and using the filter envelope to give it a nice little pluck.

Overall, that was a nice french house track. Keep up the good work!
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Re: <Original> <Non-Pony> <French House> Rare Chance

Postby ph00tbag » 21 Jun 2013 12:03

I do agree with Pulse on the bass. It sounds really muted, and a bit more pluck would bring the funk out a little bit better.

At around the 2:30 mark or so, a guitar riff starts playing that sounds just plin out of tune. What's up with that?
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Re: <Original> <Non-Pony> <French House> Rare Chance

Postby Electric Velocity » 22 Jun 2013 09:32

I really don't know. I think the sample was just going out of key so my notes sounded bad with it. I am uploading a new version without the riff and punchier drums... I think.
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