Last Chance [Drum and Bass]

[Xil3]

Should I submit this for rainbow and rooted?
I made this drum and bass track just before I went to EQLA. It took me a total of ten hours. I used massive, absynth and fm8.
If you would like to remix this track I will happily give you the stems.
https://soundcloud.com/officialxil3/last-chance



Any input would be helpful. Thank you very much.

[vladnuke]

eh, it's a little repetitive, also
the distorted bass is:
a. muffled (make it clearer/sharper)
b. stereo autopanned (bass shouldn't move like that, leave that to the synths/percussion)

the snare needs more punch and less resonance, you can accomplish this by blending it with a white noise hit

the synth at 1:18 is a bit euro cheese, but it's alright i guess.

mostly fix up the structure to make it more interesting.

[Nine Volt]

No, don't submit something that only took you 10 hours of work to R&R.

Most of my criticism is just echoing what vlad said, so I won't repeat.