[chill][tribal]Periah(main menu)

[Ohffy]

My friend's making a game and he asked me to make his background music stuff
So this is what i came up with for the main menu thing or something

https://soundcloud.com/ohffy/periah-main-menu-take-1

Any criticism would be much appreciated

Thanks for listening

[Genkar]

Synths sound pretty basic, but it's very simplistically charming. I wouldn't necessarily call the piece tribal, but either way, I like it.

If you were going for a more tribal feeling, I'd recommend maybe have one drum in the background holding one 4/8 bar pattern or something? Not entirely sure how it would sound, just a minor suggestion.

Kinda short, so it's hard to critique. Cool stuff though.

[Ohffy]

Synths sound pretty basic, but it's very simplistically charming.

Thanks man, yeah i did't want to make it too complex since its just like the title page and all. Im currently working on a complete orchestral remake of this song for the end credits and stuff.

I wouldn't necessarily call the piece tribal, but either way, I like it. If you were going for a more tribal feeling, I'd recommend maybe have one drum in the background holding one 4/8 bar pattern or something? Not entirely sure how it would sound, just a minor suggestion.

Ill try it out because i really want to get that earthy vibe going on

Kinda short, so it's hard to critique. Cool stuff though.

Yeah it's supposed to loop and stuff

Thanks for the words man!