<Non-Pony> <Original> <Trance> Rain Of Meteors

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<Non-Pony> <Original> <Trance> Rain Of Meteors

Postby ExoBassTix » 09 May 2013 14:20

http://www.soundcloud.com/exobasstix/rain-of-meteors
Finally finalized it.
So, let me know what you think, I'm curious :)
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Re: <Non-Pony> <Original> <Trance> Rain Of Meteors

Postby ph00tbag » 09 May 2013 15:30

The bassline is a little bit floppy-sounding. Not sure how intentional that is, but it takes some drive out of the track.

There could stand to be some reverb on the mid and high end parts just to give the track a bit more of a sense of space. In general, the atmosphere of the track is somewhat lacking, too. Just some more delay on the leads would give it a bit more flair.

Finally, I'd probably get a hat line that does more to make the beat more cohesive during the higher energy parts. Even if it's just off-beat open hats, it can do a lot to make the track more driving.
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Re: <Non-Pony> <Original> <Trance> Rain Of Meteors

Postby ExoBassTix » 10 May 2013 04:54

Hmm, I guess you're right at your points. Thanks for the advise :)
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Re: <Non-Pony> <Original> <Trance> Rain Of Meteors

Postby HMage » 11 May 2013 05:11

Needs more saxophone.
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Re: <Non-Pony> <Original> <Trance> Rain Of Meteors

Postby ExoBassTix » 11 May 2013 06:43

Maybe in the Trance track I'm currently working on.
(Seriously though, the melody is god-like <3 how do I do this?)
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