by ph00tbag » 09 May 2013 15:30
The bassline is a little bit floppy-sounding. Not sure how intentional that is, but it takes some drive out of the track.
There could stand to be some reverb on the mid and high end parts just to give the track a bit more of a sense of space. In general, the atmosphere of the track is somewhat lacking, too. Just some more delay on the leads would give it a bit more flair.
Finally, I'd probably get a hat line that does more to make the beat more cohesive during the higher energy parts. Even if it's just off-beat open hats, it can do a lot to make the track more driving.