Marshmallow - A Rarity song

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Marshmallow - A Rarity song

Postby Whitetail » 21 Nov 2011 16:35

http://soundcloud.com/wherewolf-therewolf/marshmallow-demo

Well since I've been way too busy to work on songs lately I had some free time and thought to myself that I've never finished a Rarity song, so I figured I'd try. Then I figured I'd go all out on it - not much yet to it but I'm aiming for an overly distorted sort of sound similar to PrototypeRaptor's stuff (http://prototyperaptor.bandcamp.com/tra ... raptoredit - big influence/almost if not practically ripping off from this song). I'm also planning lyrics but not sure how well that's going to go since I'm not exactly good with that sort of thing.

If I could change your mind, I'd set you right boy
If I could change your mind, I'd make things---- clear
If I could change your mind, I'd make you see that
Rarity is best pony
If I could change your mind, I'd set you straight

Don't you try to resist
Those Marshmallow hips
Don't you try to resist
I'll see you break

(pardon my horrid, horrid lyric writing)

Yeah it's practically ripping off the lyrics in that song in a few places too (like the "If I could change your mind" bit (woo ripping off two artists from one song)).

So what do you think so far?
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Re: Marshmallow - A Rarity song

Postby Whitetail » 22 Nov 2011 21:20

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Re: Marshmallow - A Rarity song

Postby ArtAttack » 24 Nov 2011 16:46

Excellent sampling. You heard what I thought of this in skype :D
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