natsukashi wrote:The drums could use some more depth. Layering and reverb is key to get nice drums. but something I reacted on is that you're building a lot of suspense in the track (the drums that come in at the beginning and the wooshy fx) that you're not really utilizing. When you're building suspense you create the illusion that something is going to change, and if it doesn't you are generally left unsatisfied. =w=
(sry for delayed answer, my old computer broke)
Yeah you're right I should pay more attention to the drums, and beginning is kinda messy

It just doesn't feel right, I just didn't know what to do to make it sound better >_> (imagination KO)
I've just learned some new tricks in music making but I need to practice... NEXT ONE WILL BE BETTER! (yeah talking about computers, the computer I used to make this music was really crappy, so I was like rendering music every time I wanted to listen how it sounds and what I need to change...it was painful and slow process, BUT I've got new PC and this one can handle everything xD)
haha thanks a lot for your critique,
I will totally consider your advices in my future musics!soup2504 wrote:I like it. Alot. Like, ALOT.
I was pretty proud of this one, but as always, I find new mistakes and small things to fix ^^
Thanxie!
AlicornBob wrote:bartekko wrote:...I'd recommend getting to a music school to learn playing piano and all things theory.
I'm actually taking music theory for my Senior year, but I'm hoping to go into engineering.
I don't want to give up learning music, now that I have only just begun. It's just that I know I can be good at either if I could just learn devotedly instead of having to bother with all my other classes. A lot of what we are learning in my English, Mathematics, and Science classes are things that come easily and naturally to me. They feel almost pointless and are extremely tedious to me. The problem is that it's not as if I'm smart enough for the AP courses either.
Damn. I talk too much. Sorry. Nopony cares what I'm doing in life.
Oh AlicornBob, learning music theory isn't easy! To be honest I just hate how everything in music theory is so complicated and confusing.
Sometimes I just give up for short period of time, but then I remember how much I love music after listening to someone's else's work ^_^ , everypony here say to
don't give up , they know what they're talking about.
Just get some motivation and make ZE MUSIC MAGIKS!
