Help out please? (FL Studio 10)

[veridianphantom]

Hello everypony, i'm in need of some assistance, my song i've created is only half-way done, however i now realized, to insert more of the song accordingly i need lyrics as a melody and some suggestions on how to make it better would be greatly appreciated.

i uploaded the project file so people can see it, please need help badly.

http://www.mediafire.com/?uzb0xq17pbyr81z (from FL Studio 10)

suggestions on how to improve it are welcome, and remember: this is the first time i've made a song with lyrics.

[K3WRO]

ok...

First of all, welcome to MLR! As I can see this is your first post!

Alright, moving on

hmm..... it's not bad, not bad at all

Some things to improve though, probably use effects? or more interesting transitions?

The melody also needs to be tweaked, it sounds like you've been using sequences and arpeggios, try not doing that, write your own melodies and stuff, makes it interesting and creative

The composition is ok, just needs intros and outros

[veridianphantom]

ok...

First of all, welcome to MLR! As I can see this is your first post!

Alright, moving on

hmm..... it's not bad, not bad at all

Some things to improve though, probably use effects? or more interesting transitions?

The melody also needs to be tweaked, it sounds like you've been using sequences and arpeggios, try not doing that, write your own melodies and stuff, makes it interesting and creative

The composition is ok, just needs intros and outros

Thank you, thank you.

Effects huh? well i'm fairly new to FL Studio 10 so i gotta learn all this, and more interesting transitions? how do you mean?

i've no idea what part of my song is the melody, i'm guessing it's the Sytrus Harmonizer, i wouldn't mind making my own melodies but like i had said, i'm new and i use what sounds cool.
As for creative well that's a bit of a problem, i have trouble being EXTREMELY creative.

Intros and outros? the song ain't done yet, i'm trying to get the lyrics done first then change the song according to the lyrics, then i gotta record me singing and perhaps use a program to tweak the words kind of like what Woodentoaster does. and i thought for sure the beginning part after the slow first few seconds would be the intro.