lyricist for free put me to the test

[indeable]

hey i have no idea how to start getting my trade out so im offering lyric writing up here i make everything and pride myself in being a true lyricist i work fast and am able to make almost any genra and if its out of my comfort zone i love to learn so i can improve. ill also be posting some of my old stuff if anyone wants it for something.

also post below with criticism and whatever else


contact me via skype at indeable or email me [email protected]

thanks ~indeable


sad itailian style heartbreak song


i was a man in love
graced by a angel above
i loved the way she shone
she broke my heart
and my life fell apart
in the ashes i sit alone

i though our destiny
we would share in company
every time our eyes would lock
my heart would suddenly stop
she was the world to me
but it was not meant to be


she was delicate as a dove
we fit like a glove
with her my heart would roam
with despair shed impart
my love would not start
and im left shattered and alone.

she was with another man
those eyes of pure cyan
had lied that night
i had fallen for her charm
my mind had been disarmed
but our love had lost sight

when i was told the news
my heart split in two
her love for me had turned
but from her lips to tell
i felt as if in hell
my heart had burned

now all i do is think of her
her face is old my memorys blur
in her i use to revel
i thought her good
or at least i would
shes now my white devil


(chourus: insert where needed)

love was a dream
i promised to never forget
for her my love would scream
but that was a decision i would regret


crisilis rap


Mwahahahahahah I tricked you all
without your blessed shield equastria will fall.
i cant believe tia didn't see through this .
Now bow down before your new queen crisiliss.

All it took was a quick little switch.
You thought you could beat man thats rich
now prepare as my army will fall from the sky.
suck out your love leave you all to die.
Ill give you twi that plan Was cunning
ill count to ten I prefer you start running



you thing your puny elements can help you now?
Im afraid that is something I cannot allow
you put up a fight but it was no feat
now watching you die will be my treat
tell me how it feels to lose at last
and all that love you made is now wind in my mast
with the main six down and the princess in my hands
its time for me to rule the lands

the queen of the changeling give into her power.
Cause the sight of our queen will make you cower
so take a step back buckle right in
cause the rain of crisylis is about to begin

this land of yours will be just fine
the perfect place for me to dine
the power I own is now greater than you
and the great main 6 have nothing to do
as for you little cadence I thank you for this
with the power of your love I cant go amiss
but as much as you push and as much as you try
its a new stated fact that you are going to die

so what do you th... wait what are you doing to him NOOOOOO
it cant bee ILLLBBEEEEE BBAACKKK KKKKKK

peace rap


Fire over water water water over air.
when the three come together ying and yang make a pair.
Its the rule of the universe the standard for us all .
To break this cycle would cause life's engines to stall.

Yet we steal wage war and fight with our nabores,
and still our actions catch up with us later.
Now this isn't about why there is a god or a creator.
its about how our actions are creating more haters.

You should see yourself from the outside in
stereotypes make up your choice before interactions begin.
You decide who is better by the size of their domain.
And end up discouraging the average of plain.

Yet most of you call the perfect religious follower.
And still leave all basis of you follow to be left unheard.
If you decide to say my message is absurd.
Then you should reread what your teachings leave for you inferred.

I am not trying to attack anyone in particular.
But whenever I take a look at our earth something seems amiss with her.

But instead of being stuck and held up inside.
I am asking you to take this with a matter of pride.
You should keep up your head show it in your stride.
Try to help other people and violence will subside.

But if your attacked don't just sit there and get beat.
But instead of getting mad and turning up the heat.
Let them ware themselves out and give compromise instead of defeat.

now I am done delivering I hope you get the mail .
Cause indeables out and remember take the less traveled trail.

[Captain Ironhelm]

It's too bad I don't have a vocal song right now!

[CaptainKBX]

Humm... I had the idea to ponify Rush's Clockwork Angels album - could you do that? Rewrite the lyrics to a song in a parody-like manner, about ponies?

[indeable]

allright done helping kyoga and nothing from captian kbx in response so im open for requests again.

[CaptainKBX]

Oh, apologies. I don't go on here much, I'll email you or skype or something