Hah, think I follow you on some other sc you have. Anyways, really cool stuff. Really like the percussion with the little vocal snippets and the hat runs. It's very intresting to listen to, something I dont get too often in house, let alone in fandom music.
Pianolike synth is well processed and doesn't feel cheesy.
You introduce back the stuff in the intro neatly, but I'm sorta wishing something else got introduced with it too, like I know this is a wip, but like something like a synth thrilling along in the higher register, or a second bass or something, something to switch it up a little at that point.
Overall though, I really really like this, hope you finish it.
Also, we have like an introduction thread, its over
here if you wanna like properly introduce yourself, but no hassle, really.