Mischief Max wrote:I had also used Colortwelve's page as a base for mine, and if I'm reading the log correctly, he deleted a bunch of stuff I had put on my page...
Sorry if this comes across as... Well, I'm not quite sure how it would come across, but your bio seemed to me to consist of what the guidelines call 'impertinent information,' meaning it wasn't so much a bio as a few sentences that seem to apply to all musicians - like the bit about finding your style. Everyone does that.
The last thing I want to do is make people feel like their contributions don't matter, but if you don't have a story to tell, don't say anything. Glaze's page doesn't have a bio, because nobody I know of really knows his story. Conversely, Gryfinz' page doesn't have a bio because his music career pretty much sums up to 'he released some music, then he released some music, then he released more music.' I guess my page has a bio because I figured out a way to articulate why my albums are important to my career - and they are very important to me. Maybe if you could provide something detailing exactly
how you started and exactly
why a given song or release is important to your development as a musician, it'd have a greater chance of staying up. But offer some detail, don't just say that you too attempted to find a style of music to make.