<nonpony><remix><110BPM>Wisp X - Alone (ft. Hatsune Miku)

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<nonpony><remix><110BPM>Wisp X - Alone (ft. Hatsune Miku)

Postby DJSadEyez » 16 Aug 2014 05:35

So yeah... This is something slower. Totally unexpected and done in like 30-45 minutes, for some cooldown, if you need it...

Leave some comments on this track, if you like it or what I could improve.
Just a reminder I have never ever done something like this.

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Re: <nonpony><remix><110BPM>Wisp X - Alone (ft. Hatsune Miku

Postby Injustrial » 16 Aug 2014 09:49

There's a bit too much low end in your piano and the kick is very big in the mix. I'd suggest dialing those back a bit to give the rest some breathing room.
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Re: <nonpony><remix><110BPM>Wisp X - Alone (ft. Hatsune Miku

Postby DJSadEyez » 23 Aug 2014 19:43

Thank you for your advice!
I will take care of it the next time, though I don't really see, where there's no breathing room for the rest. I'd need some explanation there... I think it's really minimal already >.>
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