by Injustrial » 08 Aug 2014 08:55
The snares sound a bit off to me. Not sure what it is, maybe they're too hard or the reverb is getting to me. Vocals are way to low in the mix, I can barely make them out, especially when the part before sounds a lot louder.
The part right after the vocals, where it picks up, feels nice. Like the end credits of an older videogame. A few bends seem to be slightly off key, but they should be simple to re-record, provided you play consequently.
I like the promise this holds, it's a bit pop'y for my taste, but it's nice for what it is.