<Pony><Original><Industrial Metal> I'm a Brony,Proud to Be!

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<Pony><Original><Industrial Metal> I'm a Brony,Proud to Be!

Postby TheSkullX2 » 28 Jul 2014 10:13

So here is my very first pony song.I first wanted it to have some orchestral part but turns out i just made it an industrial metal thing.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/f308ugnniw6ll ... 0Be%21.wav
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Re: <Pony><Original><Industrial Metal> I'm a Brony,Proud to

Postby ganondox » 28 Jul 2014 12:38

I suggest you get soundcloud, it will make it easier for other people to listen to your tracks as then we don't have to download it first.

Anyway, for the track, the biggest problem is that that the main riff and beat need better mixing, it's very muffled sounding, so unless that's intentional you might work on that. The main riff also get's a bit repetitive, but the second guitar part and the bridge make the song more interesting. Good for a first attempt, but it could use some more work.
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