Luna's Retaliation.

[AgileDash]

Something I starting working on in the early morning been putting it off every now and then because I keep running out of ideas. I honestly Don't know where I'm going with this. I'm trying to make something that Ive never made before and that's music that isn't kinda happyish. I might be going the wrong way with this one... Idk.

http://soundcloud.com/agiledash/lunas-retaliation

[Overkillius]

I blame Dr. Dissonance for the title.
whether it's his fault or not.

I like it, I think there is just a lot of noise... maybe I am missing the point but I think it would sound better with some stuff cut out about half way through.

Honestly I have some other ideas, but it's your project and I don't want to introduce the idea's without an example to show. also it is late and I should sleep.

[Dr_Dissonance]

I blame Dr. Dissonance for the title.

I am in no way affiliated with Luna or her attempts at overthrowing Celestia!

As for this piece, I quite like it! It develops well over time and sounds like it should develop even more! Maybe something that doesn't have a similar sound to the choral part, so it stands out. I'd like to hear it when it's more fleshed out!

[AgileDash]

Honestly I have some other ideas, but it's your project and I don't want to introduce the idea's without an example to show.

Honestly this is the only reason I put these up. So maybe I can get some Ideas from others. Since ive never attempted music like this I would agree certain parts don't make any sense or are to loud etc. Ideas are welcome.

[Sabreon]

Liking the feel of this, though I think it needs to develop a little more. I like when that little melodic idea comes in at 0:45, and I think it could really build after that if you want to make it longer, thicken up the texture from there on as well, maybe.

[Sabreon]

Perhaps introducing a new section by varying the choral line or the bassline (maybe make the choral part a descending pattern rather than and ascending one for a little while?). Perhaps even play with some strong, sustained low notes (or an active low part).
Either way, I think some more development of the melodic idea would be good.