Sawtooth (Finished version)!

[Tephrax]

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Now i'm 2 months into producing music, I'm beginning to realise how little I really know. Every new song is usually experimenting with something else. This is my first piece to involve AUTOMATION CLIPS! Plus a bit of panning with the crash. I also made everything multicolored on FLstudio because it makes it look prettier.

So.. What do you think ;p?

[Tephrax]

^^^^-v

[bartekko]

so, ahem (I have a strange thing to reviewing music on my netbook's speakers even when there's logitech x-530's right next to me)

[Tephrax]

Hehe ty
New Version up: Much better imo. Changed a few things around, added some vocals.

http://soundcloud.com/tephrax/tephrax-that-sawtooth-sound-1

Lyrics:

Round and round, that sawtooth sound
Play it again, come now make me proud
Never doubt, my friend, i just know in the end
We'll look back and shout, come and see me now.