Mogul Dash- A Place as Wonderful (WIP)

[MogulDash]

Hey guys,

So I did the mash-up, and that was fun and everything, and I am working on Flutter Cannon, which is cool I suppose, but none of those use content made by me. So, here it is, my first original song made using my own music ability, and I have come to get some opinions on it so far! Any feedback, or comments will be very much appreciated!

http://soundcloud.com/mogul-dash/a-place-as-wonderful-wip

-Mogul Dash