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Cyril befriends Alex S: Cyril with Pinkie

Postby Cyril » 26 Oct 2011 19:03

Last edited by Cyril on 28 Oct 2011 07:54, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Cyril befriends Alex S: Cyril with Pinkie

Postby Calamus_Dash » 26 Oct 2011 19:59

This alerted me to two things:
1. I wasn't subscribed to you (somehow) until about 20 seconds into the song
2. I seriously can't find anything wrong with this. I REALLY liked the original, and this makes it even better. I feel kinda bad that I don't have any constructive feedback, but I guess the one thing I would say is "keep it like this, it rocks"
how did this get here
i am not good with computer

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Re: Cyril befriends Alex S: Cyril with Pinkie

Postby X-Trav » 26 Oct 2011 21:48

I'm in yur site, checking your stuffs.

I only suggest two things.

1. make the guitar in the beginning parts of the song heavier. The original has a pretty distorted synth going on there.
2. YOU MUST PLAY THAT SYNTH SOLO (3:15) ON GUITAR.
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Re: Cyril befriends Alex S: Cyril with Pinkie

Postby Cyril » 27 Oct 2011 14:47

Calamus_Dash wrote:This alerted me to two things:
1. I wasn't subscribed to you (somehow) until about 20 seconds into the song
2. I seriously can't find anything wrong with this. I REALLY liked the original, and this makes it even better. I feel kinda bad that I don't have any constructive feedback, but I guess the one thing I would say is "keep it like this, it rocks"


Thanks! I love subscribers, and I should be making more awesome as time goes on.

X-Trav wrote:I'm in yur site, checking your stuffs.

I only suggest two things.

1. make the guitar in the beginning parts of the song heavier. The original has a pretty distorted synth going on there.
2. YOU MUST PLAY THAT SYNTH SOLO (3:15) ON GUITAR.


I tried to make the beginning heavier.

I will eventually, but for now (becuase of the time it would take me to learn it properly) it's staying as it is.
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Re: Cyril befriends Alex S: Cyril with Pinkie

Postby Stars In Autumn » 28 Oct 2011 20:44

Man, this is a sweet song. Awesome synth solo too.
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Re: Cyril befriends Alex S: Cyril with Pinkie

Postby replacer » 28 Oct 2011 21:12

Really nice overall.

If I was to offer any thoughts... This could be just me but I think the current mix sounds a little 'dull' and a tad squashed. I would be interested to know what happens to the track if all the levels were dropped back a bit so the compressor/limiter isn't working so hard, and I would be tempted to add a little more presence on the top end, particularly in the drums.
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Re: Cyril befriends Alex S: Cyril with Pinkie

Postby Cyril » 30 Oct 2011 17:50

replacer wrote:The feedback I crave


Oh yea? Alright, lemme actually master it. I just used the soundgooderizer before. Honestly the levels on the track were boosted a bit to react more harshly with the compressor/limiter.

I don't make that much dance music.

remastered version uploaded.
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